Your Sunshine, lits my
Shadowed dreams....
Your Voice, brings back my
Ages of life......
Your Smile, loots away the
Beauty of nature......
Your Care, makes me
Lost in yourself....
Your Fragrance, fills in my
Cherished memories......
Your Reach, makes my step even
if i'm blind...
Awaiting Millenniums for a millisec to be with U.....
a Very heart touching theme....u conveyed...ur poetry is xcellent...
ReplyDeleteU did somethng grt vich can b done 1nly by few...
coming 2 mee.....i likeddd veryyyyy much...
congratrulations....so nuv poetry kummestav..anamata....
vitin u der is grt invisible talent...
it's really a grt way of conveying the theme...
no negative comments.....
Thank u very much...
ReplyDeleteamiable lines...
ReplyDeletehey siri bagundhey .... its really touching...in future nak lover dorkithey nee chethey letter rapichi tanaki ista hahahahaha......padipodhey ni poem ki hahaha...any way u keep writing ra siri
ReplyDeletehmmm wait neetho chala panulu unnaye aithe idi chadivaka anipinchindi one thing 2 say i'm nt getting words 2 praise u dear...........
ReplyDeletejus awesome......
ReplyDeletesiri neku fruit&nut estanu nakosam na lover ki letter rastava........neku any fruit&nuts kavalante aany estaanu siri
ReplyDeleterly ur poem was super...:)